how i can get better grade in this essay

Hello, this is an essay for critical thinking and composition class. I would Like to check my spelling, grammar, MLA format, thesis, topic sentence, citation. every think to get better grade and I want 5 full pages. I used book” presence of others” article for Mike Rose “Lives on the Boundary”

 
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